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Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the dying man
As all the world comes into its plans
And stories have their own lives
That evokes both swords and knives

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the mother to her son
As at long last her life comes undone
And the little boy starts to cry
The tears of war in his eyes

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the man says to his lover
As their love finally goes under
And he lays her down to die
He sings his sorrow to the broken sky

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the minister to me
As all the others wait and see
And my heart beats in my chest
For I know I am not meant to be blessed

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says my heart to my head
As it still wishes for love or death
And I know what is right
But I still wish for comfort late at night

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the flower to the demon
As the devil’s heart comes undone
And that heart is broken again
Only to be forgotten as another friend

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the fox to the moon
As she knows that the wolf is going soon
And the horse is in its pasture
Far away until the after

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the artist to the soul
As they begin to lose all control
And they begin to laugh
For it is over at long last

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Says the condemned to the lord
As he begs for release from the noose’s cord
And as he leaves this world
He gives his last to what is that girl

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

I say my last to you
I say this as my heart is true
I will not leave like the weak
Not until I find what I seek

Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Hallelujah
:iconkazazalwayz:
I know that this isn't my best, but I thought that it was good enough to be posted. :)

I've been listening to this ([link]) for quite a while and it inspired it.

Give me crits if ou wish, or don't. Either way is fine.
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:iconsapphireturquoise:
oh i can't visit the link cuz it's filtered here so i don't know what song you were inspired by but it kind of reminded me of "change" by Taylor twist. but i like your poem way better!
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~KazAzAlwayz Jun 22, 2011  Student General Artist
I'll have to look it up xD sounds interesting.
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:iconsapphireturquoise:
omg i just read this poem again (I love it so much) and i read the first comment and at first I didn't know it was mine, I didn't pay attention and I was like what kind of a fool would write such a terrible comment?! and when I saw my icon and name I was so shocked!
the poem made me feel kind of sad but i think it's your best poem. I love it....
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~KazAzAlwayz Jun 22, 2011  Student General Artist
It's quite alright dear xD all tastes change in time and I will not hold against you the preferences you had then or have now.
but thank you all the same
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=earthsea-23 Jul 21, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Hehe! I know that song! I love this. You did exeptionaly!
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~KazAzAlwayz Jul 22, 2008  Student General Artist
Why, thank you very much! :D
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=earthsea-23 Jul 22, 2008  Student Digital Artist
np at all! :XD:
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:iconcollamair:
that was beautifull....
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~KazAzAlwayz Mar 24, 2008  Student General Artist
Thank you, Vincent.
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~Rudedude55 Mar 23, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
srry bout dat, Jesse fel sleep at his kee-bord gain he own da floor now
-peece Steph
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